The Food Detective - 2
My favourite character in the book was a WeightWatching publican called Josie Welford, a middle-aged woman with a quick tongue and a love of good food I could identify with. One morning I asked myself "What if?" and promptly rewrote the whole thing from her viewpoint. The book fairly rattled along: I was actually sorry to type in the last full stop.
To my great delight, my publisher liked Josie too - so much that he asked me to write another book about her. I hope you enjoy the The Chinese Takeout.
So if your novel simply isn't working, take a tip from me: stand back and ask if you're seeing it through the right pair of eyes. Good luck.